The Affair

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

When deception steals your hope.

The Affair

Broken dreams are left,

all that I had to offer

crushed by deception.

03/06/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen

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The words echo the pain involved in the act. Good work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Indeed Aaron, thank you!

no matter how strong you are, when someone stabs you in the back, the pain can be unbearable.
you expressed it very nicely with a handful of words.
nice job John

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Woody

Brevity at its best. Tells so much in so few. Excellent...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sami. Like you I enjoy using different styles from time to time.

10 Years Ago

I like that. You are welcome...:).........................

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Added on June 3, 2015
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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..