Love Rests Here

True love is until death

Love Rests Here

If love feels like this,

feels as good as loving you,

then let me die here.

 

12/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[Beccy]

True love ignores the passage of time. Just beautiful.


Beccy.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Tis so true just a shame it is treated as a shallow breath these days rather than a sigh. Many thanks Beccy.

[Richard🖌]

Hi, John!
Your deeply expressive words have indelibly touched my core with tenderness, along with the passion of a man who knows how to bond with that which he feels is ultimately endearing and enduring.

The Senryu has never been my strong suit, but you seem to have a genuine knack for making it virtually dance off the page, into the reader's mind, heart, and soul … the music lends perfect ambience.

A truly stunning piece, John … thank you immensely for sharing it with us! ⁓ Richard

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Richard for such generosity; I am touched that a writer of your caliber could see merit in my uneducated scribbles.

[Richard🖌]

John,
I consider your skills in this form to far exceed my own … it is rare to find one writer to excel in all form and genré of poetry.
Thank you for your highly welcomed compliment, indeed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this speaker is already in heaven...on earth.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Jacob and this is whee we all wish to be. Thank you.