Try, Try and Try Again

Love is out there somewhere.

Try, Try and Try Again

My heart has oft

been punctured by

the grief of love's

lost melody.

A silent echo

of ice,

sharp as glass

and hot as embers.

And yet I,

I still pursue

that wisp

of fog.

That glint

of sun.

That dream

of summers

enchantment

returned to me

so that I may bask

in it's magnificence.

 

13/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Always persevere in seeking. True love awaits. And all the pain once felt, will dissipate with time. Very uplifting and motivating write!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Nadia

[R Smith]

beautiful writing John, had me dreaming down romantic avenues, thanks for that :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My pleasure, thank you Richard.

[AaronFreitas]

I can relate to these words my friend... I'll take some advice from this piece. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad to be of help Aaron. Many thanks.

[Kelly Scheppers]

And yet I,
I still pursue
that wisp
of fog.
That glint
of sun.

...never stop! It will find you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Kelly!

[andrew mitchell]

This reads like Romeo using a new tact in wooing a new Juliet, As always a great write John

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Andrew.

[wordman]

and may the dream live on my friend

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Only hope will tell. Thanks WM

[wordman]

hopes and dreams,this is what we`re made from

[miaham4050]

u made of racisim and ignorance bitchman

[wordman]

i wonder if they know he`s loose? that potsd is rough ,i will contact the va and let them know your off your meds

[Willard Wells]

I am a true believer in the thought that there is always hope for and with love. Forever the Romantic. My GF says I could not live without a woman and I say, who would not want to be without a woman. Especially the ones that truly show love and compassion for me and their fellow man. Great p.iece and I like it a great deal

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Willard.