Shelter

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

A place to desire.

Shelter

I lay in the shade

of everything you offered

and was so thankful.

13/06/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen

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fattycbreezy52

OKay,there's much more to the word "shelter" here.
It's the very place of his existence and not just a residence or residing place.In a word,she is one of her primary necessities-food,clothing,shelter and she!

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Indeed you have read it right FCB. Thank you!

jacob erin-cilberto

she is the elm of his existence.

really like this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Indeed Jacob. Many thanks for your kindness.

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great senryu, John, and a beautiful musical piece to accompany it... shelter isn't simply a roof over one's head, it is being completely loved by someone and finding shade in that love... wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you FT.

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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..