Softening Heart

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

Captivated.

Softening Heart

I so simply melt

like warm chocolate in the sun

when I see your face.

14/06/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen

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fattycbreezy52

This is not simple.No at all.How can anything be simple when it comes to chocolates?*_*
This is in a way.............Wow!!!!!!!!!!
She has the power to melt an otherwise nonchalant or may be a tough guy."a warm chocolate in the sun"
Wow, an already warm chocolate.Yet,not entirely hot melting in the sun.This shows the intensity of describing the extent to which he is melting,A very warm,chocolaty writeup

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you FCB. Chocolate is an aphrodisiac and is quite a sexy product.

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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..