Old Wood

Old Wood

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

Old Wood


That garden bench

is tired.

 

It has lived

through sun and storm,

night and day.

 

It has served

as a warm spot

on which to dwell,

 

makes that corner

complete

and quaint.

 

Now it is weather beaten,

discoloured,

dry and cracked.

 

It needs fresh stain,

a few moments

of attention,

 

revitalising oil

rubbed

into aching,

bruised timbers.

 

It was once

a proud teak,

standing tall


in one of the forests

of origin,

Myanmar its home,


but since its demise

it has served us well

 

and still we neglect

and disrespect

the autumn

of its death.

 

10/01/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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and still we neglect
and disrespect
the autumn
of its death.

Appreciating your thought deeply here. I like the 'autumn of death' very much. Its usually autumn of life that we think of.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Divya
DIVYA

8 Years Ago

You are welcome John.
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Gee
Takes me back to the summer. Restored the old bench, painted it the same colour as the shed, turquoise. It looks awful. Can't wait for a few winters to attack it. Enjoyed the read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Thank you Gee; Her indoors will not let me attack it lol!
Sometimes we neglect things we don't mean to, and lament it when it is too late.

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Thanks 'M' this bench I would love to restore but my partner wants it left as is!
Restoration seeps out of this write be us physically, materially or making the comparison to a faithful piece of furniture and it's bringing back to life. i enjoyed this piece as i too have a neglected faithful bench. a reflective piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

More frustrated me thinks; In this case I was looking out the window at one of our benches that I ha.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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