The Devil's Breath
A Poem by
John Alexander McFadyen
https://www.nytimes.com/2017/04/04/world/middleeast/syria-gas-attack.html
The
Devil's Breath
I am the force of evil
you should not wish
to provoke.
For the unleashing
of my venom
is a sore sting;
a poisoned barb
no human can survive.
And I,
I will not end there.
I will sack your house,
rape your women
and slaughter your
children.
For I am the voice
of al-Assad.
05/04/17
© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen
Reviews
Dark and eerie - and what makes this so darn scary is the truth behind your words. Well written. :) Julie
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you Julie. Wish we all knew the truth, the whole truth......
A sad world. al-Assad. Modern day Stalin. Killing and abusing your own people. This is a great sin. A powerful and sad poem my friend John.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
A sad world. al-Assad. Modern day Stalin. Killing and abusing your own people. This is a great sin. A powerful and sad poem my friend John.
Coyote
8 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote.
8 Years Ago
You are welcome John.
A passionate attack upon someone who attacks children. Fine poem, and the right words !
Posted 8 Years Ago
A passionate attack upon someone who attacks children. Fine poem, and the right words !
8 Years Ago
Thank you Leslie. Such a sad affair and one largely ignored until too late by the powers that be.
sounds like that idiot from syria
Posted 8 Years Ago
sounds like that idiot from syria
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8 Years Ago
Yep indeed Ron 'that idiot from Syria'. Maybe now someone will go in there and get rid of him? Oh Do.. read more Yep indeed Ron 'that idiot from Syria'. Maybe now someone will go in there and get rid of him? Oh Donald! Many thanks.
Powerful. This talks more than just a poem. It is such an outrage from deep within. Truly depicted. Well done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Powerful. This talks more than just a poem. It is such an outrage from deep within. Truly depicted. Well done.
8 Years Ago
Thank you Capolavoro
8 Years Ago
You are very much welcome. :)
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John Alexander McFadyen Brixworth, England, United Kingdom
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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools..
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