Crown of Thorns

Too many broken promises.

Crown of Thorns

My heart bleeds red tears

over all the years I've lost

in sorrow and pain.

 

06/04/17

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Such wretchedness in so few finely laid words.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Words laid as nay maiden was. Many thanks Emmajoy.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And these tears are not spilled outside but become etched on the walls of the heart, eventually dried..

Short, but heart touching..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you YumnaKay

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, John Alexander 😊

[J Manuel]

Such an internal self-assessment where you feel those drops drip from your heart into the depth of a torn cavity ripped by the traumas of love – I feel the pain expressed here.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks for reading and commenting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

tears become part of our blood, blood becomes an ingredient of our tears.

j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Eventually they do given the 'passions' we have endured Jacob. Many thanks.