Seeing Red

Emotional eruption.

Seeing Red

Anger burns so raw

as the hot rage takes my soul

and I crave revenge!

 

31/05/17

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh yes. I can relate to this. The rage and venom bubble and all you want is for the other person to feel what you are feeling.....only worse! You have a knack of packing a lot of meaning into just a few lines. Wonderful. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Lydi.

[duff]

I've experienced this emotion many times. Mostly in traffic with idiot drivers. I like your perspective on having a meltdown John.

"hot rage"
You can just picture steam coming out of the ears. Nicely penned.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cheers duff. Am chilled mostly lol!"

[duff]

I would say the same thing but I do have those moments, haha!

[Enchanted-Raven]

I know that feeling, well expressed :) x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As a raven you soar. Many thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to know anger. Hard to relearn calm. I do understand this poem my friend. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cheers Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

Cheers back to you my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we just can't "let it go"!
the heart needs retaliation...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Jacob. Indeed. Many thanks.