Meteoric

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

When incredible forces meet.....

Meteoric

When dark stars collide

heaven is split asunder

by that eruption.

23/08/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen

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jacob erin-cilberto

those forces are something to sigh upon....
i like this this haiku erupts in its own right....

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

They are indeed Jacob, very powerful. Many thanks for your kind words.

DIVYA

There are no sensual words here yet I feel a strong sexual undertone to this. So good....

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Perhaps dear poet there is sensuality in everything we poets do? Many thank yous!

8 Years Ago

You are welcome John.

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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..