Black Cap

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

Unrequited love is brutal

Black Cap

Hang me as the thief

who wanted your tender heart

now I'm serving life.

25/08/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen

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DIVYA

Indeed it is cruel. I never fail to marvel at your choice of words showcasing deep emotion.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Indeed you are very kind dear Divya. Thank you.

8 Years Ago

You are welcome dear John

jacob erin-cilberto

yes, better to be hung and put out of our misery than serve that life sentence without her love.
j.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

I know you relate Jacob. Many thank yous.

Lydia Shutter

WOW, so much emotion in these three short lines! Love, when unrequited, can be a life sentence, unfortunately. Good one, John. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi

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Added on August 25, 2017
Last Updated on August 25, 2017

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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..