See Me

See Me

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

When love is hard to believe, believe.

"

See Me

Awaken your heart

to the tenderness I have

to offer to you.

 

27/08/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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And what is there is right now, at this moment, when everything around is faded, and there's only us... only our heartbeats pounding with the same melody, our spirits whisper to each with trusted assurance, the loudest voice, our bond in harmony with the universe, and all the worldly noises disappear... how deeply tenderly You've said it, true lovers can understand Your words well, each relationship is unique its own way, and can't be compared to the other ones... wonderful profound piece, filled with tender passion and gentle yearnings, with soft hope and a full warming heart...

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

You have felt this one Light and you express it in a poetic and knowing voice. Many thanks.
lightsong

8 Years Ago

You've said it in three lines so beautifully, fully and deeply ~~~
John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

I am, deeply grateful Light.
i have been with some hearts hardened by pain....and have been one of them....can relate to this well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Yes indeed Jacob. People can become so moribund in their relationships because of the past or their .. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..