Man's Albatross

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

They lead us into temptation!

Man's Albatross

This is creation

God said to newborn Adam,

she is your downfall.

30/08/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen

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jacob erin-cilberto

i think we men are often the same for women.....
we just came first----but more likely they will be here long after we are gone.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

[Whispering]I agree Jacob but one has to promote the accepted paradigm. I guess I am talking our w.. read more

Glen's not so clean sla..

I love it. Short and poignant!

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Glad you like it Glen, Many thanks.

DIVYA

A great senryu John. I like the pic so much...

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Ha! Thank you soooo much dear Divya. Glad you like the picture too.

8 Years Ago

You are welcome John :0

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Added on August 30, 2017
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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..