Our Cat

A cat Tanka!

Our Cat

Oriental poise

chocolate fur, emerald green eyes,

lithe limbs akimbo. 

She calls to us so plaintive 

demanding that we see her.

 

10/09/17

Author's Note

Photo: Coco enjoying the morning sun by me.

Reviews

[wordman]

but of course,they demand attention

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And the Oriental is a master of the art Ron. Many thanks.

[pia]

this poem made me so emotional
i dug a grave for my kitten and buried her with my own hands. it was probably one of the most heart breaking feeling ive felt so far. she was small, soft with bright green eyes. loved playing hide and seek, super lively and hyper, watch her die and not be able to help her was painful. i still feel her presence in my garden, catching butterflies, playing with leaves and wanting my constant attention.
beautiful poem
cats are wonderful creatures. they deserve love :(

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am sorry this meant sad recollections for you Pia. Coco is 12 years old and sometime we will lose her too but she has given us such joy, Many thanks.

[pia]

Make the most you have with Coco
i wish your cat more than nine lives

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Pia.