Unrequited

Unrequited

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

When elusive is all that is real.

"

Unrequited

Your heart has lain

upon so many pages.

Vellum parchment,

soaked in the sweat

of intended courtship

against a high wall.

The halo light shining

through breaths taken

as frost catches lungs

and whispers become

a distant echo

beneath halogen induced

shadows.

When I was single you

ignored me.

When I was not

hope was given.

When I shouted you

shut me out.

When I whispered

you blew smoke

in my eyes.

Frailty has made you fickle,

held you fast

in no man's land.

A wisp of perfumed air

who appears at sunset

in visions

of romantic bliss

only to be blown

to the heavens

by mornings soft breeze.

Only memories now left

for me to savour.

09/10/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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Something we savior forever. Amazing use of words and thoughts my friend. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Indeed Coyote, many thank yous.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
i wouldn`t have a clue,great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your indulgence Ron, Very much valued.
damn i relate to this.....there was someone, is someone...always moved toward me when one or both of us were unavailable...then when it was possible...she was only silence.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

So perhaps more common than I thought, Thanks for commenting Jacob.
A wisp of perfumed air
who appears at sunset
in visions
of romantic bliss
only to be blown
to the heavens
by mornings soft breeze.
Only memories now left
for me to savour.

very nicely done... i enjoyed all of it..

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Galadriel for your kind words.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..