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A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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Some simply fear being open enough to give in real life.

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You speak in cat's cradles

so as to ensnare me

in the bonds of desire,

and yet leave me tongue tied.

Then you hold up

the mirror of deception,

pointing a beautiful,

tender and innocent finger

at the cracks.

You tell me I made them;

caused the seismic impact

that shattered the glass.

But I see through

the steamy glazing now.

I know the dread in you,

the fear of plummeting,

of free falling into a place

where eyes meet

where skin touches skin

and you must

give yourself completely.

 

09/10/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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fear of plummeting, of free falling. I hate heights. this is a good one. thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Many thanks for your reading and comment Roxane.
i guess i have usually gone the other way..opening up...and it has been a bit dangerous at times...but don't know another way to be...
i have to free fall---or i would stagnate.
j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Me too Jacob, wear my heart on my sleeve. many thanks for commenting.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..