Dreamscape

Just what you deserve.

Dreamscape

Now the storm

has passed

the air is stilled.

fresh,

untroubled.

From the top of The Ridge

one can see

all the way to the horizon.

In between, sweet

valleys and rolling hills

embrace villages

tucked warmly

into sweet green folds.

Beyond the line

where the land

meets the sky

lies a sea of possibilities.

A place of dreams

where love

can be soft and gentle

for you,

and where it will last

forever.

 

09/10/17

Reviews

[KWP]

I feel the first few lines at the start, then flowing along to the vision of landscape to slide into that ending are perfect. I love that still air when the storm has passes, I love the aromas after the rain. Cleansing X

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes I could see it as I penned and have been there often. Many thank yous for your indulgence KWP.

[duff]

Atmospheric writing that you can drift to. Or maybe light a joint to. I read this as Champagne Supernova played. Cool moments my friend. Thank you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Duff for such a kind review, glad you enjoyed it.

[duff]

You are very welcome John. Good stuff as always.

[Ardra]

A place of dreams
where love
can be soft and gentle
for you,
and where it will last
forever.

sometimes it makes me wonder does it really happen that the love can last forever :)

thank you for sharing such a poem full of possibilities and hope

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think we can make it happen when we are happy with someone and stop having too many expectations. Hard but possible. Many thanks Galadriel.

[Ardra]

mmm a valid point... if we can just let go of expectations so easily .. :)

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Love the imagery in this poem. thanks for sharing the wonderful talent.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Roxane

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I love this poem John, and the image is enchanting. Great language, form, flow. Post-storm imagery that holds magic. I can smell the freshness and the breeze over the radiant hills and valleys. Kudos!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Annette for such a warming review.