Sliding In Deep

Surviving

I fell through the cracks

in the ice around your heart

and simply melted .

 

29/01/19

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

5/7/5 very nicely done. I felt your words.

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Chris. I do like senryu and other short forms such as tanka and haiku. Einstein Noodle introduced me to the cinquain yesterday so I have had a go at it as well.

[Chris Shaw]

I've also tried the cinquain. Pleased with the results, but it took me much longer than I had anticipated :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sorry to say I rattled of four rather quickly although not posted yet lol! Are yours posted Chris?

[Chris Shaw]

Yes John. They are in my library. I can't even remember their titles. I'll check and let you know. Lucky you being able to rattle them off. I've just turned a shade of green :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah but I lazily stick to free verse for most of my writing whereas you use classic style.