Dream

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

A cinquain as inspired by Einstein Noodle

If I

could only feel

your sweet kiss on my lips,

then I would be a happy man

always.

29/01/19

© 2019 John Alexander McFadyen

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jacob erin-cilberto

yes, as Chris mentioned, E is a good teacher and such a fine poet...no better place to get inspiration. And i like this because it is so true, even just one kiss might be remembered forever, just one.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Many thanks Jacob. I can say with certainty that I have been lucky enough to be inspired by a number.. read more

Chris Shaw

Your cinquain is lovely. Mr E is a good teacher. I have put Maple Orchard on the live feed on the forum. I did another one called Melt Down.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Hi Chris, Many thanks. I have been on here for a few years but what is the 'live feed'? will check i.. read more

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Added on January 30, 2019
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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..