Embrace

My second cinquain (Artwork by Anna Shukeylo)

Feel me,

hold me closer,

enough to sense you breathe,

to know what lies within your heart

of gold.

29/01/19

Author's Note

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

feeling the heat of being one with another person, not just physically, but mentally, emotionally...the breaths being inhaled and exhaled in such close proximity..
very sensuous in every way.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes I remember it well Jacob. Many thank yous.

[Chris Shaw]

Your second is even better than your first. Nice work.

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Morning Chris! Tis cold here in the Midlands but I am guessing you may have snow?
Many thank yous!

[Chris Shaw]

None yet, promised later.Have a good day.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting concept. Everyone needs an embrace from time to time.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed a hug or an embrace. Many thanks JL

[Einstein Noodle]

oh i like it a lot ... the pic, title and cinquaine all working together .... and i really like how you arranged the lines .... emotively warm ... universal ... makes me long for those hugs ... today i will give one ... thats me goal .. even if its just my puppies that will let me ;))))))))))))
E.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha, ha, You fiend! puppy love and all that. Many thank yous 'E'

[Einstein Noodle]

:)..................