Moment

My third Cinquain

Your lips

slip moist passion

into the game we play,

into the intimate embrace

we share.

 

31/01/19

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Your cinquains are all related to one theme, passion. You do these exceptionally well. Mine are all on the natural environment. You write with sensuality.

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you, I think?
Ah indeed many of my pieces are about passion (romantic/sexual) or have a passionate approach (strong). I write on many topics though and try different forms, free verse being my default lol! My 'handle' is Passion8!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

PS have two more cinquains ready to go not on the theme of passion!

[Chris Shaw]

Oh yes, a compliment was meant. I look forward to reading more :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Just posted one so you don't think i wrote it in response to your comment lol!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you do this form so well...love the elliptical shape of these poems..

a touch of sensuality...the interlude...yes.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Jacob. I do have Einstein to thank for introducing me to the form. Will do a couple more then move on,