Chastity

Another Cinquain!

Let me

invade your mind.

Let me take your silent

virginity so completely

we die.

 

02/02/19

Author's Note

Reviews

[Iam-me]

Great intimacy projected from this one. Heart, mind and soul. Maybe even the spirit, intertangled. Gave me goosebumps this one. You are very clever and articulate in these short sweet, amazing cinquains in general.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Dawn

[Lorry]

This has to be the most vivid cinquain I have seen, which hints at body, but feels like souls entwining, knowing so much more than the physical. It is almost spiritual in the body having to die to let our essence know freedom. Very impressive write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel more than physical intimacy here...i feel intimacy of the mind...she doesn't understand a lot of things...sort of naive...he wants to teach her...help her find her way...and together they will die from the joy of knowledge of life.
j.

[Corset]

yeah! what Jacob said!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed, such mutual act should be spiritual. The act of penetration should feel like entering a place of worship should it not? And if a woman offers her virginity it shows faith. Many thanks for looking carefully at this one Jacob.