Living a Lie

Living a Lie

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

So many avoidant folk sit writing.

"

So what joy does she have

if she sits behind the screen

wrapped in cellophane.

If she hides within the depth

of the internet,

lest she have to face reality.

She can walk her dogs

and make her soup in her perfect cottage,

in that wonderful rural setting.

She can write her angel

heart out

and give us all goose bumps

with her sweet, sweet perfumed breaths,

but with dry knickers,

lips without true passion

and breasts long untouched

by loving hands,

just who is she?

 

07/02/19

© 2019 John Alexander McFadyen


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An Interesting perspective from a man. I doubt she sees herself that way whoever she is. She may have found real contentment with her life.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Indeed. Based on several women I have known over the years but could so easily have been a man! Than.. read more
Sounds like someone who got dumped and compensated by becoming a romance novelist. A nicely penned portrait, but I wonder if she sees herself that way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Close. Very close, but I guess I had a mix of different people in mind when I wrote it. Many thanks .. read more
Funny enough, I have met her and experienced her internet secluded ivory tower

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

I guess it was sort of loosely based on several characters and could have been a man too lol! Thanks.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..