Origin

Origin

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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As it says on the tin. Written while reading the book by the same name by Dan Brown.

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We are here on earth

not through some godly action,

but because the nature of the universe

dictates that chaos and entropy

be punctuated by order,

by structures that more efficiently

dissipate energy.

We are part of the wider purpose

of spreading the force of the 'big bang,

softening its effect,

slowing its seemingly infinite progress.

And we, like it or not

efficiently dissipate energy,

much like a tree, or a tornado,

or ripples in a river bed.

Or the sun's energy

focussed upon soil

heating it until

the germination of a plant

which spreads the heat.

The primordial soup,

from which we sprang,

was cooked for millions of years

until DNA grew

and we slowly evolved.

Thus the evolution

that Darwin saw

will take us ever closer

to increasing our efficiency.

Change us unendingly

along the way

with no help from

any maker, until we

are robotic in our

very nature.

 

13/02/19

© 2019 John Alexander McFadyen


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It’s funny John, we really are planning for our own extinction as we are heading for artificial intelligence. Man won’t be needed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


It could be said that such science would not by definiton be beautiful. I'm glad to see that you prove this untrue. And I couldn't agree more.

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Well the conclusions are that, much like in the Terminator and other sci fi projections, man will be.. read more
Ken Simm.

6 Years Ago

Clarkes three laws.
When a distinguished but elderly scientist states that something is possi.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Indeed this may very much be so!
straight forward and to the point Sir John! i respectfully fully disagree ;) there is only emptiness without our Creator's very Holy Spirit in our lives ... there is nothing to keep one from de-evolving in my opinion .. down a very frightening and darkened path :( ... but ... that's just me ... i love that you have very clearly presented a more scientific view of "Origins" ;)
E.
ps. lovely video ... breathtaking vistas .. she is singing about child birth isn't she??

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Ah the age old debate indeed has a polarising effect. I long ago decided to stop believing in Santa .. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

peace on ya brother ;))))))))))

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..