Marital Dispute

Marital Dispute

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

So unnecessary.

"

Entwined in battle

we tear our own house down,

raise it to the ground.

 

21/03/19

© 2019 John Alexander McFadyen


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John,
Hold off that "raising" (razing) until I'm out the door! Last place I'd want to get caught . . . between such emotional turmoil.
Tom

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Ah too late the roof blew off and the walls tumbled in. Many thank yous Tom.
i love the double meaning of "raise" and how it is used here.
almost like a sarcastic...blowing it to smithereens....rather than actually raising the bar.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Exactly that Jacob. I envisaged the heat and intensity of the argument blowing the roof off. Many th.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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