Death In Nahualá

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

Aftermath

Bones grind to a halt

as a thirty-two ton truck

ploughs into the crowd.

28/03/19

© 2019 John Alexander McFadyen

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mattavelli

Hi, John! :)
You packed a lot of weight into this one, and great use of language. I suggest moving your note from the description to the authors note area, as the story is heavy.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thank you Matt I will look at that.

andrew mitchell

The wrong time the wrong place plays a big part in survival and or just bad luck. Very sad indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Yes such a random act. Neither driver stopped!

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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..