The Feeble Sex

True!

Man is weak.

He is born to suckle,

even when grown.

And suckle he must

as testosterone

floods his veins

and invades his

thoughts.

Woman holds

so much power,

the swell of her breasts,

a flick of her hair,

a wiggle of her

child bearing hips,

and he is ash.

 

12/04/19

Author's Note

Reviews

[Aurora]

I like this one a lot.....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad you liked it and thank you Aurora.

[R.E. Ray]

Truth! This is why we say “Mother Nature.”

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No I blame the 'Me Too' movement lol! Lets get the Me Also movement for men off the ground! Cheers RER

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is a totally different slant on things I’ve never read or seen before
Firstly in most of the world today I thought men saw women as subservient to their needs (men’s needs) so it is very different and refreshing to read your view

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think there are many men who put women on pedistals and an equal number who think them play things. Women have always had my respect. I blame my parents! Thanks Julie.

[Wild Rose]

Women are subservient BUT they work under cover to let men think that
Women sow the seeds for any changes > Then follow the seeds up by constant checking the progress

[Robert Trakofler]

Thank you for understanding me so well I'm gonna go flagellate some now and thank god for the ladies

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Bunny. But I somehow think flagellation will not cut the mustard lol! Many thanks.

[Robert Trakofler]

well it wouldnt be the first time my actions would be misdirected

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree John. Men think, they are gods, one day we learn. Just serving the woman. Thank you John for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Exactly Coyote John we were born to serve! Many thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. I know and you are welcome John.

[Einstein Noodle]

i am so in your camp my friend...we are witless putty in the woman's hands ... so grateful for their beneficent, maleficent dispositions ... usually ;}
E.
ps. https://youtu.be/7lp7FtJXp7k

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok, well Percy Sledge takes me back in time but the lyrics say it all. Poor us..........Cheers 'E'

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ...those lyrics are a balm for the male soul me thinks ... its cleansing to sing along with them :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thought Sledging was summit to do with that most English of games, cricket!

[Einstein Noodle]

pretty sure it has summit to do with a big hammer :)

[Chris Shaw]

And who am I to disagree? Every word a masterpiece of truth:)

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Aye an I knows ma place! Morning and thanks Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

Good morning John. Have a great Monday.

[gram linski]

They are the p***y and the Master, they have it all, and we are snivelling little s***s on the side, who will do anything for a touch of erotica, or just a touch,

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Aye just so long as we know our place. Cheers gram.

[Pure Evil]

LOL....no truer words have been spoken on this subject. And see, as i have said, you ARE a true poet. I would give my left arm to be able to write like this. Very well said.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad you liked it PE. Many thanks. You are though overly kind.

[Pure Evil]

Not at all, you deserve every word. You are, as much as I hate to say it lol, what I'd like to be

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you again PE. Read Leslie Philibert, Jacob erin-cilberto, Gee, gram linski, Mrudula Rani. They are all different and great writers.

[Pure Evil]

I certainly will...thank you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

exactly...i have always seen them as the stronger sex, in so many ways.
We think we are the tough guys...the bread winners, all of that old time thinking...
but when it comes down to it...they bring us into this world and they sustain us.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Personally, I think it is two way and the balence lies in the relationship and personalities invloved. But I accept my flaws dear beloved tutor. Thank you Jacob.