Cut To The Chase

I think someone ought to call the Fire Brigade!

You are a

thrill a minute

as you weave such

sultry smoke

in my eyes.

In fact me thinks the Cafe

is literally ablaze

with so many

fanning the flames.

Erotic outpourings,

served undiluted,

raw, unminced.

Served as hors d oeuvres,

mains and deserts,

and all with glistening

cherries on top, and

offered to hungry

meat eating mouths.

What could be more

appetising?

 

17/06/19

Author's Note

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

now.................who could that be me wonders?! ;))))))))))))))))) i like the fun and appreciation for no holds bard's hot tomales train ... Mr. McFayden you are a friend of poets for sure ...but for myself ..i must agree with Christine :)
E.

[Chris Shaw]

A little of what you fancy doesn't hurt. The same diet though soon becomes boring. I am all for variety. Well written free verse John. Good morning.

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Morning Chris. Yes and no I guess. Variety in some things in some ways is good in others tis chaos. Many thanks.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Awesome write... perfectly describes some of the amazing talents here serving the hungry at heart.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I guess it does Travis, many thanks for stopping by.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Sometimes a little spice is a good thing in one's life.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed so Edie, I do so agree. Many thanks.

[Aurora]

This indeed is a delectable piece of writing.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are most gracious and indeed have set the cat umongst the pigeons today! In a nice way of course.

[Aurora]

Not sure if a feline set loose on some innocent avians is ever a good thing.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Most birds can take care of themeselves my Lady!

[Aurora]

Not for long. And not all. ;)

[Relic]

I'm guessing this refers to a particular female on this site who seems to be setting guys things erect?

Nicely said.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

That obvious huh?
Thank you Relic.