Hoisting flagstones of poetry
in passion and anger and …
a heavy toll upon thy shoulders,
you write because you must
you write because you can
you write dyslexic night shame blues
you write because you are,
you are a writer, dude,
and have a savage beating
heart, full of fun and empathy
and a dirty dog's gone blues
licking your own balls,
who could disagree,
you write because you have to,
you have no
f*****g choice...
thoughts recede and cede.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Man you are just so f*****g amazing, crazy but a dude! Many thanks for such a great poetic repost!!!
Streamline with feelings and adorned with reality, this piece opened my eyes to see what I'm actually doing here. Sharing my thoughts and freeing my mind. Sometimes I may do that rightly and sometimes I may be wrong.
A good piece.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Yes there are multiple reasons for writing, all of them are emotional. Many thanks Kay.
For a long time after I started writing, I couldn't accept the title of being called a writer or being praised even for what I wrote. Now that I do, I realize it is exactly like how you say - 'scribbling thoughts upon the flag stones of poetry'. ..
Nicely penned.
Thank you Lea. I think many of us 'psudo' writers do it just because we do.
6 Years Ago
I think we do it because we're compelled to do it. If I couldn't write, I would go nuts.
6 Years Ago
Oh I am nuts and I write lol!
6 Years Ago
LOL. In the words of the Cheshire Cat:: We're All Crazy Here.
6 Years Ago
Takes one to know one. I do like crazy!
6 Years Ago
So do I. :-))))
6 Years Ago
Wow!!!!!!!
6 Years Ago
Ok that got me writing crazy.
6 Years Ago
Wonderful! I love writing crazy!
6 Years Ago
Maybe a collaboration?
6 Years Ago
Sure. I've been looking for an excuse to collaborate with someone. A liitle poetry and a little pr.. read moreSure. I've been looking for an excuse to collaborate with someone. A liitle poetry and a little prose. Perfect!
I love how you have conveyed with passion how you feel and act as a writer. You are compelled as I am. I have no idea where it comes from, it just happens. Wonderful free verse John.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thanks Chris. Yes it simply comes and from all sorts of stimulants.
Hoisting flagstones of poetry
in passion and anger and …
a heavy toll upon thy shoulders,
you write because you must
you write because you can
you write dyslexic night shame blues
you write because you are,
you are a writer, dude,
and have a savage beating
heart, full of fun and empathy
and a dirty dog's gone blues
licking your own balls,
who could disagree,
you write because you have to,
you have no
f*****g choice...
thoughts recede and cede.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Man you are just so f*****g amazing, crazy but a dude! Many thanks for such a great poetic repost!!!
yes, i am the shaken part i think...quite often...and write because i have to, not to get on the popular or top writer board...i don't know how they figure those, or why...just here to share...and we inspire each other, John.
thanks for the nod for this...really like this piece..it's from the heart of writing.
j.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Agreed Jacob and I feel privilaged to be in your company and over the years have tried to learn from.. read moreAgreed Jacob and I feel privilaged to be in your company and over the years have tried to learn from your sublime use of English. Failing badly but yup you have often given me a thread! Many thankd Jacob.
Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..