Open Mind

Too often we rush to judge others. Some have a rougher journey lol

Do not judge me so

before you have walked the path

in these stilletos.

 

07/07/19

Author's Note

Reviews

[gram linski]

I judge you not, friend
I have walked in those stilletos,
I was wearing fishnets
hope you were too, lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah I was more interested in taking off someone else's tights lol! Cheers grammy boy!

[gram linski]

You ever call me grammy boy again and I will hunt you down like the dirty b*****d depraved dog that you is and f**k yer s**t scarred soul,and f**k yer bones as yer children watch and weep, lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You sound just like David Demers when you are angry!

[gram linski]

Better writer, better reviewer, f**k all coompooter skills, and nae inclination to shaft yer sorry a*s, althou some of yer poetry does rock my boat, are you grooming me, thank f**k, thought I was the only 14yr old on here not getting it, the intrinsic existential amorphic beauty of mindful poetry, I mean, ya dirty slag,

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My second chuckle of this Sunday. Do you write for The Big Yin? Cheers bro!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think we've just taken the wrong meaning of freedom of speech, so there's really no limit to where the tongues would stop spitting venom. Too easy judging others than stepping in those stilletos and seeing from their pov. You said that nicely here. Well penned, John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Why thank you so very much. Don't think I could take two steps in stilletos!

[Chris Shaw]

Strong message here John. None of us know the path that others tread, so who are we to judge them.

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Chris. No one has yet remarked upon the satire?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"take a Walk on the Wild Side"
to each his own...we all have such different make-up inside---and there needs to be more understanding of that.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Exactly that Jacob, many thanks.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

So short but powerful!
Judge me not for you have never walk the path,
You never know what I've been through along the line.
If you've been there, you can then be justify,
If not so, keep your mouth out of my life..

This is to confirm that I truly agree to poem. Many judge recklessly without knowing or considering what you may be going through. They don't know the pain you are nurturing, they care not about what you've passed through. They just opened to their mouth to condemn, becoming blind to see the imperfections in their own lives.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed so Kay, so true, many thanks.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

It's always my pleasure reading your writing.