Tats

Tats

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Inspired I am afraid by Chris! Linked senryu.

"

Why?

Skin painted with ink

like an ancient warrior

I'm quite a statement.

 

26/08/19

 

Drawing on Skin

Your flesh is canvas

where the true artist can pen

a beautiful scene.

 

26/08/19

 

Cover Story

I'm invisible,

behind this artistic ink

you cannot see me.

 

26/08/19

 

Exhibit

Such romance in words,

I the human billboard sign

happily display!

 

27/08/19

© 2019 John Alexander McFadyen


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ahh . . . a rat a tat tat! How about that!Hey John a great piece . . . well thought out.
T

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Nice bit of alliteration that reminds me of the Untouchables and the Tommy Guns they used. Many than.. read more
I saved this for last because I had a hunch it was going to be great and I was right! Maybe it's just because I feel identified. I have a tattoo (which my mother claims to be her biggest disappointment!) and I'm planning on a whole leg sleeve. It's hard to face the stigmas and taboos of being tatted up, especially when judgement comes from those closest to you. I'm happy to see society is becoming more lenient towards it tho. Excellent work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

I think some tattoos look really good and are art but some are simply defacing of the skin canvas. Y.. read more
Kaede16

6 Years Ago

I already have it lol and it does look good, but thanks anyways xD :)
never never never tat words on the body .. nor names ;) your title drew me right in .. i read Christine's poem also .. about her nieces tat .. your senryu cover the many sides of being tattooed ..some kept secret and some shouted .. different strokes for different folks .. well done.. nicely linked .. thoughtful .. from one who has more than one :)
E.
ps. spellbinding music video .. is it from a movie?

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

And I not a one dear 'E' and never the intention to ink my skin with anything more than sin! Many th.. read more
hell we should be walking bill boards ,lol at least we could get paid

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

If only Ron! Many Thanks.
 wordman

6 Years Ago

you`re welcome,and i am tat free
as a bit of a tat man, mesell, you got all four spot on, the needle and the damage done, hehehe,

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Not sure about them tats but you certainly give plenty of needle! Cheers for the review bro!
This is a wonderful combination, John. Each revealing the meaning behind their existence. So much artistic, No wonder you titled it Tat.

Good one, John.

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kay!

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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