Senryu By Numbers

Senryu By Numbers

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

As it says on the tin.

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Number One

Go cherry picking

but only take the best fruits

to eat for yourself.

29/09/20

 

Number Two

Tis only human

to need to go for a squat

and sit on your bot!

29/09/20

 

Number Three

Now the number three

that's a whole different story

you can count on it!

02/10/20

 

Number Four

And the number four

has you knocking on the door

perhaps it's heavens?

02/10/20

 

Number Five

Four fingers one thumb;

on those you really can count

and you have two hands!

 

02/10/20


© 2020 John Alexander McFadyen


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#1 sounded selfish--not only do you take the best fruit but you keep it for yourself? No wonder you go squatting alone and then there is that different story--just to make it clear, that door ain't gonna open John because of clause #1..and finally to #5 as they say you have two hands and one finger go *** yourself again due to clause #1..:) Great provocative haiku John...Thank you for the unexpected un-lady like outburst...lolo....I had fun...hope your day is fun too...:)

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5 Years Ago

Glad you had fun Kira. It was fun to write too and your review gave me a giggle too, thank you dear .. read more
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5 Years Ago

Sounds like perfect fun...have a good 3D visit with real people...see ya when you get back 💖

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..