I Breathe You In

I feel your heart beating

as I hold you close,

with hands lingering

in warm places

 where love yearns to go.

I touch your skin

and breathe you in.

I will taste of your love

again and again.

image courtesy of

4truelovers.com

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

This is a striking piece of passion personified ! You've perfictly described the kind of moment lifes memories are made of. You have a way of putting thoughts in to words that are pure.
Yet another pleasurable read !


bill

[Dara]

Thank you so very much Bill. There are certain memories that are etched in our minds forever to be revisited time and again bringing back those warm feelings when the nights are cold :-) Always a pleasure to see you here.

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A taste that lingers forever when it's right. A wonderful description of how we absorb love.

[Dara]

Thank you for your wonderful review. Yes, when it is right there is nothing to compare :-)

[Jamestown]

Gorgeous piece of work!
you couldn't have expressed a loving charge
better, wording is flawless:)
Picture just adds to an already fantastic piece,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Dara]

I am just so honored by your warm comment. Thank you so much Jamestown!

[Jamestown]

My pleasure, this is gorgeous:)

[MsJewel]

You write with elegance Dara. Your words are soft and romantic - like a warm hug. Stunning presentation as well. Gorgeous poetry my dear friend.

:) Julie

[Dara]

Your thoughts mean the world to me Julie, especially since I am a bit of a virgin when it comes to writing romantically. Thank you!

[Misery]

Dear Dara, this is a poem to wake up to...and with any luck, to go to sleep with.

Please keep revealing the treasured facets of your soul once concealed.

[Dara]

Oh my, you have just made my day with those words. There is more where that came from I do believe my dear friend :-)

[Misery]

I eagerly look forward to your creations.