The Hummingbird

The Hummingbird

A Poem by Dara




From flower to flower


it flits and sips


the nector so sweet


without using lips.

 


© 2018 Dara


Author's Note

Dara
Just a fun ditty about a most fascinating bird!
Photography: Larry Ditto

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You're right--it is a fun ditty, and clever, too. How ironic that I was just now cleaning up my feeder in anticipation of their arrival.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

How fun! Do you get many? I don't have a feeder yet but once in awhile they visit my flowers hanging.. read more
Samuel Dickens

10 Years Ago

I get a few each season, usually 3-5 what I call "loyal customers" that come to my feeder. I'm going.. read more
anyone with any time to spend at all ..needs to know the hummingbirds call!! ;) .. and who is to say what lips are or are not?? :) .. delightful to read Dara!
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

Oh I love that!! Yes, who is to say :-))) So nice to see you here. Thanks for the visit and sweet c.. read more
Einstein Noodle

10 Years Ago

you are so welcome my friend!
^^ I love watching hummingbirds, they are so beautiful! You have a nice and simple poem describing them.

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

Thank you! They are most fascinating. I am glad you liked my little poem :-)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

^^ You're welcome!
They are nice birds to watch. Nice poem!....Levi

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I am not sure my poem has done them justice but it was fun to write. They are the most fa.. read more
Levi Levin

10 Years Ago

I am amazed at their directional senses.
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Gee
A fun read about a beautiful wee bird.Nice Dara,nice.....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

I always feel it a priviledge to have them visit such as yours as well :-) thank you!!
wow that's really very sweet of you!

the nector so sweet
without using lips

Amazing lines!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this sweet review. I could watch them all day :-)
Writer at last! Sky ~

10 Years Ago

Welcome friend!
They are fun birds to watch and this was fun to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

Thank you! Yes they are just fascinating to watch.
that was short and sweet...... nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

Thank you Kajal. Short and sweet, like those precious little birds :-)
Wonderful write.
It touches my heart.
The picture enhanced its appeal.
Best luck,Dara!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dara

10 Years Ago

Thank you :-) They are very touching, delicate looking creatures. So nice to see you.
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome :-).
You have nicely depicted the beauty of this divine creature.
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This is such a lovely piece on the hummingbird...It's an interesting bird, flapping its wings fifty times a second which is equivalent to 34 MPH...can you imagine trying to wave our arms at that speed? :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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10 Years Ago

They are complex birds that actually go into a hibernating state when not feeding or looking for foo.. read more
Dara

10 Years Ago

That is very interesting. They just seem so vulnerable and it is always a thrill to see one.
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10 Years Ago

I know...it's too bad they only live for about five years :(

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I am a retired teacher who has just recently discovered the joy of writing poetry. Formerly known as Passion Flower, I decided to publish using my own name. My poetry is simple and from the heart whi.. more..