happy

I had an image in my head

about a girl and her braces

the family had a dog

i thought him golden

and I decided it was that I'm alone …. sometimes

with no other way to show that I am

and I can't not be careful enough

I don't want to upset anything

but then I think about it

everything

and know that wherever you are you're feeling the same things

about something entirely different maybe

but i find I am simple

and basically happy

and the way you sleep

is very funny

Reviews

[WordShaker33]

I really like this poem. To me it was about trying to describe all the strange little thoughts we think up that tend to linger in our brains. I would say this is a job well done, thank you for sharing :)

[Richard]

yeah, basically it was like that :)
that's what life is for me ... this is not a good picture of that
but thank you and yeah it's the little ideas i guess

[Mosunmola Adeniyi]

What a cool poem this is! I love the merge of different messages in one body. Keep it up dear

[Richard]

thank you very much

[Mosunmola Adeniyi]

You are so welcome