The Shadow

I, Shadow of the Night,

Beneath the starless sky,

Seep through windows,

Away from light,

And into forest,

 I do hide.

Where no iris,

Shall maunder on,

The dark thing I’ve become.

Reviews

[Saddam]

very nice poetry...actually i like dark poetry...I used this format too...so thank you.

[A Lawless Lad]

I like it. The feeling I got from just reading it versus your YT interpretation were vastly different which was cool.

[S.A. Laminak]

Thanks! :)

[marty360]

Ooh! Really like this piece! Dark and deep, yet subtle at the same time. Especially like the last 2 lines, amazing write :)

[marty360]

Last 3 lines*

[S.A. Laminak]

Thank you! This is the verbal rendition I made a while back. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f--uqLWQx-o