Untitled crime novel

A Book by Pat Nurse

My first attempt at a crime novel. The first two chapters are written although they are likely to chnage as the novel progresses

Chapters

Untitled crime novel

© 2013 Pat Nurse

Author's Note

Some of the detailed info in these chapters may be moved to others as the book progresses but I am looking for general feedback on writing style, characters so far, and whether this draws you in enough to want to read on and read more. Any other constructive criticism is most welcome.