You must have the most vibrant, wonderful garden in the world if you get all your inspiration from viewing it from afar.
Full of lush visuals and delicate description of the natural frolicking shenanigans of those who play in the garden home.
A lovely piece. Well written as always.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
dear Doodley... you have. Give. Me the gift of laughter with your mischievious review... as though t.. read moredear Doodley... you have. Give. Me the gift of laughter with your mischievious review... as though there were leprechauns in my garden. For 24 years I have planted holly hocks and Iris, foxglove and all sorts of flowers... they come and go... We have blueberry bushes and apple trees. A cottage that keeps giving and receiving love. Thanks for stopping by. You made my day. truly, Pat
I like how you've used the recurring theme of lavender/blue color...makes the garden seem even more vivid!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
dear Moon’s favorite daughter... thank you for your lovely review. Have you heard the song “Lav.. read moredear Moon’s favorite daughter... thank you for your lovely review. Have you heard the song “Lavender Blue Dilly.. Lavender green... you’ll be my Queen..”. etc.
Have a beautiful Spring ... truly, Pat
Such beauty and the love is naturally found all around every sight and every sound...beautiful picture you paint of the small wonders of life that can be taken for granted🌹
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
dear Time... your review is like birdsong in a garden of sweet refrain. We have moved to a new Home.. read moredear Time... your review is like birdsong in a garden of sweet refrain. We have moved to a new Home where there are possibilities of flowers attracting more bees and birds... if only Spring would appear. May your days be filled with hopeful happenings. truly, Pat
7 Years Ago
Blessings in abundance upon your new abode- may joy peace and much love find its home there , Thanky.. read moreBlessings in abundance upon your new abode- may joy peace and much love find its home there , Thankyou for your kind words- blessings🌹
You must have the most vibrant, wonderful garden in the world if you get all your inspiration from viewing it from afar.
Full of lush visuals and delicate description of the natural frolicking shenanigans of those who play in the garden home.
A lovely piece. Well written as always.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
dear Doodley... you have. Give. Me the gift of laughter with your mischievious review... as though t.. read moredear Doodley... you have. Give. Me the gift of laughter with your mischievious review... as though there were leprechauns in my garden. For 24 years I have planted holly hocks and Iris, foxglove and all sorts of flowers... they come and go... We have blueberry bushes and apple trees. A cottage that keeps giving and receiving love. Thanks for stopping by. You made my day. truly, Pat
A naturally melodic poem, extolling love and nature. Makes me want to go out under that moon! ( I am not sure about the line 'remembering intimate foxtrots'. The rhyme seem to jar a bit, but is probably just me. ) The poem is lovely.
dear aunt Astri... I appreciate your critique... perhaps I was thinking of
Foxglove melodie.. read moredear aunt Astri... I appreciate your critique... perhaps I was thinking of
Foxglove melodies which still would seem
nonsequiter ... I am a novice, however, will keep an open mind to improve. truly, Pat
8 Years Ago
I think Foxglove melodie would be fine...more in keeping with the rest of the poem. It is a lovely p.. read moreI think Foxglove melodie would be fine...more in keeping with the rest of the poem. It is a lovely poem.
8 Years Ago
Thank you auntie... so many flowers and so little time to think of a rhyme...
I can sense the serenity in this. I sort of think of my own garden being like this. But i keep changing it.
I'm obviously looking for some look that isn't there.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
dear Paul... often birds plant seeds randomly and beauty bursts forth... so many varieties of flower.. read moredear Paul... often birds plant seeds randomly and beauty bursts forth... so many varieties of flowers rebirth. We are a melting pot of nationalities and create a rainbow of personalities.. in tune with nature to compose a symphony of waterfalls and lullabies. truly, Pat
Your words are so very lovely Pat and always leave me feeling at one with nature. Another very romantic, beautiful write this is!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
dear Dara... I adore your charming review...
May flowers bloom just for you and birds sing a.. read moredear Dara... I adore your charming review...
May flowers bloom just for you and birds sing at early dawn when dreams come true. truly,Pat
LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! Your garden is so vivid & full of sensory delights. I love the way you use different versions of the color lilac/blue, both in name & in imagery. This is the way I wish I could write when I'm looking out at all these very things in my yard.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
dear Barleygirl... flowers are the reason we have hope eternal, I appreciate your review and love t.. read moredear Barleygirl... flowers are the reason we have hope eternal, I appreciate your review and love to share the beauty and colors of nature entwined with the moments of our life. May your days be blessed with sunshine and goodness. truly, Pat
Sensual scents in a garden full of nostalgia – very ‘fragrant’ and delightful write! :-)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
dear Phill... thank you for your lovely review... may butterflies gather round your and sing a song .. read moredear Phill... thank you for your lovely review... may butterflies gather round your and sing a song of love and tenderness... Amen ... truly, Pat
You have captured a most sublime and beautifully unique moment in time when all is well with the world!
Cerebrally cosmic, an enchanted garden!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
dear Tom... branches reach out to catch the sun... you have perched upon a branch
and touche.. read moredear Tom... branches reach out to catch the sun... you have perched upon a branch
and touched my soul. truly, Pat
love should always be that way ...pity we stray from such a beautiful path .. well said Patricia ...i enjoy the scents, colors and sounds this poem inspires ... its so full of wonderful thoughts ...very much enjoyed this morning ... i was slipping into a bit of a funk for some reason and you have rescued me ;))
E.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
dear E... we rescue each other with our poetry... blossoms are gifts of blessings...
I appre.. read moredear E... we rescue each other with our poetry... blossoms are gifts of blessings...
I appreciate the colors of your impressions... and the music of your words.
truly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..