Swimming To The Moon

why not? would be good exercise

If i could fall into the ocean
i would swim to the Moon
plant a flower
paint a picture
gaze down at planet Earth
see all her seas
if i could fall into the ocean
i would swim to Mars
greet the Martians
with an earthy grin say,
look at me
i swam all the way to Mars
just to say Hello my Martian friends
why all the wars here?
Red planet
Look down at my homeland, Earth
Not red but lots of waring there as well
If i could fall into the ocean i would swim into the
arms of Venus
maybe her love could save us all
 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I don'tknow thinking here has made you write one hell of a masterpiece with an excellant message... yeah the human race is in need of saving we just need to step back and take a look... so beautiful and thought provocing write. Defiantely a fav of mine.

[Kristallo]

I Love it. Seriously, i've been so into universal poetry lately, writings about stars and planets and the vast emptiness of space.. and the last line was the best! I'm saving this to my library, it's so ethereal and sweet. Thank you for reminding me how much I dig your poetry, I couldn't ask for a better read right now. :D