Sway

shall we dance

Dance with me
please
hold me close
sway with me
bone to bone
arms around
waist
arms around
neck
sway

Let the music take us
to another
realm
just you
me
swaying

Not too close
when we are alone
then
we will fall into
each others skin

For now
just need you
holding me
dance me
and sway
with me

Stay

Author's Note

restoration .. my mind is numb so no poems or stories come .. they are sleeping

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

I can almost hear and feel the rhythm of the music in this one. I really love the inner thoughts of the speaker. The flirty way she's like come here, but not too close. Later. That's the way to control a man. Besides they love it when we take command like that. lol

Good read. :)

[Morgan A Lynch]

now i am all feeling lonely and stuff.. need to cuddle. or sway.. great job..

[LittleEye:)]

wow thats all i got to say lol

[Barry S. Maltese]

Very nice. Sometimes that's all you need. Just someone to hold. Someone to make you feel cloaked from the world around us. The comfort of being in someone's arms.Nicely written.

[Racheal]

This is really good. I love the whole needing to be with someone and being transported to another realm and yet needing some space and not being too close at home. This is very touching and moving and now i wanna go dancing. Beautifully done.

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i need a cookie.

[Kenji]

I really liked this. It looks so simple but feels so complex. It flows nicely. Wonderfully written.

[Silvia - Scribo, Ergo S..]

ah, yes, the eternal dance of love! aren�t we all longing for it? wonderful piece about the basic desire to be close, in tune and more ...

[Sonashree]

Feel like dancing after reading it!
It's short and sweet !

[Amy Lou]

Kinda sad, actually...

But Beautiful. I love the rhythm of it in my head...
Feels like a song I LOVE called "Sweet Jane".

Thanks for sharing Chloe!

::hugs::
Amy Lou

[Jo Love]

Holding, dancing, bone to bone are all arresting images to suspend one's fix on reality and integrate a dream state with a fantasy, all tied together in a neat package. "May I have this dance?" Hearing music in your head, the song comes alive with a cuddle and a squeeze...excellante, and miuy bueno, mon ami...great stuff...