Colours.

She wore blue tights on the Monday

Tuesday it was green

Bright orange on the Wednesday

Thursday it was cream

I predicted black for the Friday

She wore trousers

Hate that girl.

Reviews

[Pradnya]

Paul,
what a way of expression. Just loved this poem

Pradnya

[Paul Bell]

This tells you guys have too much time on their hands. lol

[mou]

here I perceive it as an unpredictable nature of a girl which makes you wonder about her..here colors of dresses imply the character or a 'shadow of mind' which changes within a day..while 'tights' signifies a bold nature then the next day with 'trousers' describes a little restricted mind..

[Mrudula Rani]

This poem will be bright and fresh forever. What a marvelous writing! Loved it .

[Paul Bell]

That girl knew her stuff.

[Mrudula Rani]

And the wonderful poet understands his readers.

[Neville]

I was not expecting this when I was first drawn to the title. I was thinking of kids crayons or rainbows maybe but hey, this was so good. Her name was not Mandy by any chance? Thank you for this, N

[Paul Bell]

Don't know her name. But she cost me a tenner betting on her. lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An interesting and humorous piece that had me smiling.

[Paul Bell]

She kept us on our toes.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Paul Bell,
"colours" So tell me, did this lighthearted poem emanate from an actual relationship or a school mate, or some such thing?
It is interesting how people find comfort in routine. When that pattern changes it is kind of a shock right? Blue, green, orange, cream black; that's good, nice pattern. A person could feel smart at knowing or feeling another color is in the offing...........Oh man! "She wore trousers; hate that girl." The nerve of her. Hmmm........Well here is to fresh beginnings. Blessings. Kathy.

[Paul Bell]

Might have been the ten pounds i lost Kathy betting on colours. lol

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Paul Bell,
Oh cute! Yea I get that. Weight loss and gain does that...smile. It was fun for sure to read your color tale. Isn't it nice just visiting other writers through our words? Nice to hear back from you.
Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. Left the reader with wonder. Thank you Paul for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Paul Bell]

The little things that make your day.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

A sly smile....your kinda annoying....in a good kinda way....I think....grin

[Paul Bell]

It was as if she knew, but was always one step ahead.

[Valentine]

You are so funny. I needed that chuckle today. Thank you. Valentine

[Paul Bell]

Glad to help. lol

[Alice Poésy]

A playful and spontaneous piece that brings a chuckle. Love and hate can be so closely related it's rather odd. Sometimes we just love to hate in a loving way, if I am making any sense.

[Paul Bell]

Thanks Alice.