Alter Ego.

You only feel the pain when the blood runs true
One more lash opens your heart
Hear the beat
Thumping
I’m inside you
Cruel
But you wanted change
I’m your alter ego
Tearing down your barricade
Against the wall
You scream
It’s what you asked for
Tears and blood
Now I’m the animal
Unashamed you cry
Your pleasure
Naked and bleeding
You place the whip
I release your passion
You want more
Now I’m bleeding
Walking the line
Tortured in mind
You are free
Liberated.

Reviews

[Mary]

one tough alter ego, wow! it whispers "I'm the truth you asked for but delivers pain and blood. Well written and disturbing at the same time.

[Paul Bell]

Yeah sometimes the change really does shock.

[Marina]

If my alter ego turns to be like this, it'd better buy me drinks for free for all eternity. That f****r.

[Paul Bell]

Just realised the bit i missed. Alter ego. (Marina.) lol

[Marina]

Good to know!

[Valentine]

I pray if I have an alter ego it is as close to God as possible, wouldn't want it any other way. Valentine

[Paul Bell]

Something to aim for.