The Final Goodbye

She watched him sleeping, wondering

When did she stop loving him

Was it gradual

Did she ever love him

Could she love another

Her mind was made up

She would leave today

He watched her sleeping, wondering

Placing the pillow over her face

Did he ever love her.

Reviews

[Neville]

Now there lies a question...Blimey mate, brilliant write...................Neville

[Paul Bell]

Don't think she left him after all.

[Neville]

Nor will she ever......

[Mrudula Rani]

I do believe that he did love her very much. If he couldn't have her... he didn't want any one else to have her too ( he knew that she was going to leave him. God! I sound like Mexican drama.)

[Paul Bell]

I think he did.
Just a tad possessive the lad.

[Mrudula Rani]

Hopeless love can do that.

[Amy]

This poem was very good. It has a sad and ominous feel to it.

[Paul Bell]

It is rather final.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she got her freedom....maybe not as she expected to.

j.

[Paul Bell]

Yeah, I think he was a jealous guy.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Love is a tricky thing- to love and be loved can be just lust, to be inlove is love at the highest form- pillows don’t get to the root of the situation the answer lies in the heart- communication is best answer silence separates people not distance🌹interesting set here, nice twist🌹

[Paul Bell]

Cant disagree with that.

[wordman]

so many people get lust confused with love,loved the write

[Paul Bell]

Think this guy found something out.

[wordman]

and many,many more

[sette]

so sad, but as they say aside from love being a powerful emotion, it is also a variable, subject to change.

[Paul Bell]

Not a lot of change going on in this one.

[sette]

sorry to hear that

[Ardra]

God you sure scare me Paul... lol am so glad am miles n miles away from you hehehe....
if she did want to leave... he should have let her go.. not this way.... i am sure going to have pillow night mares :P

[Paul Bell]

She was leaving with the baker. No standards.

[Ardra]

Maybe the baker made good cookies lol
Very much possible it's the cookies behind her need to leave :p

[Paul Bell]

Too late now. But I'll take that into consideration with her replacement. lol

[Ardra]

Maybe stock up good cookies heheheh

[Paul Bell]

Just sent her down to the butchers.
Blast, that could be a bad mistake. lol

[Ardra]

Mmm I better don't comment ...next thing I know you are sending me a postal bomb heheh

[Paul Bell]

You wouldn't cheat on me, would you.
Where did you get that designer baby. Looks nothing like me. lol

[Ardra]

Hahahhaha.... :p
Maybe the kid got swapped in the hospital...should sue them...

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! what a corker sir ..so sudden and shocked by the turn...sure she was as well...man you do a fine job with so few lines...slam dunk says i! poor girl ;(
E.

[Paul Bell]

It sure turned around quick.