Sad Song

I had this great dream last night. Dreamt I was in bed with this beautiful blond woman.

You were, I just spoke to her going down your path. She said, she probably wouldn’t be calling you, ever.

Hate that.

Anyway, hows the song going. More to the point is it sad.

I’m not sure, I don’t do sad stuff.

Give me a few lines, I’ll be the judge.

Okay, how does this sound?

She leads me down the road

Turns around, and says that she’s not sure anymore

Sometimes things go wrong

People change

Nothing stays the same.

Hows that so far.

Yeah, that’s a bit sad. Go on.

If only you could see

Hiding in the dark won’t bring us back

It only causes pain

Something that will always remain.

Is that real tears.

No, there’s something in my eye, is there more.

Yeah, but I’m not sure I can go on now.

No, go on.

It’s better that you go now

Turn another corner

Change your name

Nothing stays the same

Tears for yesterday will still remain

But tomorrow will ease the pain.

You’re right, I could never sing that. Jesus, it’s brutal.

Well, I did tell you I’m not good at sad. Would you like a hanky for that thing in your eye?

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

I like the rambling conversation insert poem here. It's hard to know in a poem of this nature what is and is not intentional so, unless you ask, I won't offer ...:)

[Ardra]

Why is always some blonde leaving you :P heheh
what do you do to them.. that they want to run at first sight of sunlight lol..
you sure you no monster hiding under the pretense of the handsome guy ;)
that the spell is broken each morning... ah i feel a nice poem ... maybe latter.. :)
when i am not so sad :P

[Paul Bell]

The world cup is on. What is wrong with you women.
Once it's over, she'll be back, I think. lol

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

So is the ad...stop paying to much for your auto insurance part of your poem? its tucked in nicely between your last line and your name. You should be getting a nice kick back for that! LOL Im tearing up and giggling all at the same time over here!

[Paul Bell]

I've got a free bet advert running through it.
Might take Iran as an outsider.

[Mrudula Rani]

Jesus, it is BEAUTIFUL!
And the sad song did bring a tear as well....
Did you sing this sad song and make beautiful blond sad?

[Paul Bell]

Maybe why she left. Or I spent so long writing it, I forgot she was there. lol