High Couture & My Piano (Haiku) and one Senryu

High couture webbing

superior crafstmanship

Bluebottle dining.

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My Piano

Slight are the changes

Melding floating in tandem

As hammers are pressed

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The Goddess Venus

The Goddess Venus

Rising hills and deep valleys

Screeching cars pile up

Reviews

[Pauline]

Thanks Jeff. I like to write a haiku and senryu sometimes.

Take care.
Pauline.

[LostSage]

omg I love this kind of writing....mercury on horizon message sent with daffodils and jumping jacks....my private email is [e-mail]....stop in and say hello anytime you want