October's Medley

October’s clothing

A warm wrap of amber leaves

Hedgehog is dreaming

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Summer gold is gone

October’s subdued tones hum

In soft russet tunes

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Black sky’s orchestra

Played on corrugated roof

Dancing rain fairies

Reviews

[Gee]

I'm with Christine, the first two good the third excellent:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pauline .. . You have orchestrated Autumn to be emotional with Winds and Rain… it seems. to resonate with a Crescendo that Creates Compassion. gently, Pat

[Pauline]

Thanks Pat. Autumn here is usually a mixed bag. We've had some out of character warm weather but 'times they are a-changing.' Yesterday it rained non stop and it wasn't too warm either as we tramped around the dales.

Pauline.

[Chris Shaw]

All three wonderful Pauline, though your third stands out for me. A splendid offering for the month of October, and so visual too. Loved the colour and references to nature. We'll done dear friend.

Chris

[Pauline]

Hi Chris. Many thanks for your review. I thought I'd answered your response but apparently not. Blame it on the dementia.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love these, Pauline...but especially number three....

I get symphonies on my roof in the rain in October along with the acorns dropping for percussion.
j.

[Pauline]

Hi J. I can imagine what the acorns sound like. Thanks for responding to these haiku's.

read moreHi J. I can imagine what the acorns sound like. Thanks for responding to these haiku's.

Pauline.