Her Beauty ~ My inner thoughts

Mesmerized by her natural beauty,
Her dark brown eyes gazed upon me,
As if to say, at last...
"I have finally found you!"

Affectionately mystified by her presence,
She then spoke softly to me,
With an innocence in her voice...
My heart had completely surrendered,

Surreal was this moment,
A feeling I had not felt before,
Craving this inner desire...
I had to know if this was real,

Bound with sure delight,
Once again I would be greeted by her smile,
An unforgettable evening spent together,
Unbeknownst thoughts of seeing her again,

As night turned to a memorable sunrise,
Yearning for time to stand still,
Embracing her tightly,
I would kiss her once more,

Undeniable, this wondrous passion,
That has touched us both, so deeply,
A feeling of forevermore,
To be lucky in love.

Reviews

[Sammi]

Ohhh Paul
Mesmerized by her natural beauty,
Her dark brown eyes gazed upon me,
As if to say, at last...
"I have finally found you!"
this could be written to me except for the natural beauty lol and I love every last bit of it too exactly how I want to be talked to and treated cared about and all else -- it is so beautiful it makes me a little hot to be honest, I gave you 212 out of 100 -- thank you muchly! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Paul]

Haha, Sammi! Thank you!

You bring a smile to my face, that stretches from ear to ear, especially, after reading your warmest, heartfelt reviews. (that goes for my pic, as well ;)
You have every bit of natural beauty, about you. Any man would be full of good fortune, to have you in his arms ~ Paul :)

[Sammi]

Uh oh I think I felt a pulsing -- you're charming! ;)

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Paul, very romantic. A real sense of contentment in your words. Lovely soothing read. Izzy

[Paul]

Aloha Izzy, as always thank you for your kind review. I appreciate the visit.

[Tabby Mac]

This is beautiful! It's raw and romantic. Well penned!
Tabby

[Paul]

Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate the visit!

Paul

[gayleadele]

This is a really nice writing. It reminds me of the way a past someone described himself falling for me. I hope you carry love always.

[Paul]

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your visit.

[Tiana]

You've conveyed your inner thoughts beautifully, Paul. Wonderfully penned ☺

[Paul]

Thank you so much Tiana. I appreciate your visit.

[Tiana]

My pleasure Paul

[APOORVA]

very impressive writing
beautifully made

[Paul]

Thank you for your kind words.

Paul

[Mr.Writer]

Beautiful... engaging... powerful... keep it up!

[Paul]

Thank you! I appreciate your visit!

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[emmajoy]

Could almost hear the song, Love is all around us.. your sentiments certainly suggest that with the loudest of happiness and utter contentment. There's nothing more beautiful than feeling complete.

[Paul]

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your review.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This was a soft and mesmerizing read. "To be lucky in love", this line really touched me.
Nicely penned, Paul :)

[Paul]

Thanks for your visit. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! It was a pleasure reading 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very touching sentiment in this poem...a full appreciation of another's closeness...the sharing of love both inside and out.

j.

[Paul]

Thank you Jacob. I very much appreciate your kind words, and visit.

Paul