This Room

The sun bounces off the walls

Of this room

 

This room that echoes with emptiness

 

That oozes despare

 

Leaches its sadness onto me

 

And mixes with my bitter tears

 

This room I lay alone in

 

Gasping in the dark

 

The ceiling is gone

 

And the walls have sense fallen apart

 

The room that I've built around myself

 

Now broken

The tear stained floor

Peeling slowly away from me

From this 

This horror scene

Reviews

[Samoda]

i really liked it.... at first i thought it was a literal room but then i got the impression that it was more of a mental or emotional room, really liked the phrasing. and i think i agree with you on the ending.. felt like u left it wanting like one or two more sentences

[Pawprints]

Yeah, endings are always the hardest for me. Thanks for reviewing :)

[Pawprints]

It's a rather abrupt ending, I know, and I wish I had the time to make it longer (sorry) but tell me what you think!