Hurricane

Has the quiet

Ever been this hauntingly loud

 

Has the peace

Ever been this tauntingly annoying

 

How is it that I can hear the rustle

The trees

Outside

 

But the thoughts in my head

Are no more than whispers

 

Hissed beneath a hurricane

 

 

Author's Note

*Criticism celebrated*. I know my writing is far from even adequate at the moment...All reviews are immensely appreciated.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You got my attention with 5 lines of poetry here...in the lines...you give the reader stopping points as one reads this verse...and the end is subtle...goes with the rest of your thoughts...