Snow

Within all has a weakness.

A snow flake.
By it's self represents many things.
Loneliness. Uniquness. Purity.
A heart that to the touch will melt so quickly.
A hope that is lost much to easily.
A battle fought by the weak, and lost.
You can say it's science.
You can say it's religion.
I don't know what it is.
A snow flake with edges and patterns and line.
Is like us, with it's flaws and imperfections.
With it's weakness to be defeated by heat.
Like our hearts. Defeated by love.

Author's Note

Reviews

[poetic soul]

i liked it! i wanna write something on "snow" ...thnx! it inspired me...

[Adam :P]

incredible, goes perfect with the song video!

[QC]

LOVE LOVE LOVE!

[Sevendayspast]

I really liked this one :D

[Holly]

Eileen...you are better than me. I LOVE THIS ONE. ♥